Hello. I enjoyed it very much :D The characterization is very good and so the facial expressions when talking in mid-sentence. It's all very good so far.
And how do you pronounce Xzavion's name? is the X silent? or is EX-za-vion?
First, I loved the reference to Konosuba ! In view of your notes, i was expected to see horror elements early but i was pleasantly surprised to don't see this yet(except for the introduction scene) and that's nice for me that you take your time to introduce the characters without going too fast in the horror elements.
(Also, i love rewatch the first conversation between Xzav and Varion idk why but i think just that the reactions of Xzav are really enjoying to see.) Btw, like said Offlinewolf, the characters change expression mid-dialogue adds value to this game and helps to make it unique according to me. That's really a good idea that you had here !
I'm looking forward for the next update ! But, obviously, take your time ! (sorry for my mistakes, that's my first feeback in a foreign language.)
Oh geeze, thanks so much for playing and enjoying the vn!
And yes, the horror elements will appear much later in the story, I do think it's best to introduce the characters more thoroughly first to give context on the whys and hows of the actions and decisions of said characters, it also gives me the chance to give clues that will help the player make the best decisions.
Also, it's a great honor to have you give your first feedback on my project, I really appreciate it and hopefully you'll stick around for the future updates of the vn!
I'm glad that we still have sometime before importants choices of life and death. I really like your writing about chill conversations. They are enjoyable to see (especially with Xzav and Zach eheh)
To be honest, i wanted give a feedback to one or two others games previously but i never dared to do this. I feared that my feedback would be useless or incomprehensible but you take the time to respond to all the comments so i think that was a good push for me to dare to make one ! (sorry again for the mistakes).
Hello! Unfortunately, I won't and will never give specific dates on when updates for the vn will release. Because I am a one person team, its hard enough to do everything from writing, drawing, encoding, what more if I get pressured to rush all of those and release them in a specific date, not only will the update be unpolished, many parts of it may also get cut out for the sake of reaching the deadline. I am still on college too so I only got a few hours spare to work on it everyday.
Hopefully you would understand, and I hope this won't make you lose interest in the project, I will do my best to release updates as soon as they are polished and ready.
I love the characters specially Will. The story and writing it manage to capture my attention right from the start. The only thing that bothers me a bit is the character design i think it need an improvement. Overall its 9.5/10 for me. Good Job looking forward in the next update.
And yes, the spritework really needs a bit of work, Im not satisfied with them yet, after all I only have a small team working on the project consisting of me, myself, and I. I have never really gotten into art until I thought about making this vn (literal zero art experience) everything from the sprites, backgrounds, and music are all placeholders for the time being until I either improve and earn the skill to make those or until I get someone more skilled than me to create those.
The next updates will probably still have these sprites to use unfortunately since I dont see myself hiring a professional artist anytime soon, I hope you can bare with me in this.
This was a really delightful experience to read! I especially love how the characters change expression mid-dialogue, it makes them feel so alive. The characters were written really well and I liked them a lot!
Thank you! I did do my best to make the characters feel more alive and realistic, I'm really happy you noticed that, again, thanks for checking my VN out xd
That was quite something for an initial release! Lots of insights!, but it makes me dread what is to come... I can only hope you will make it feel more natural and smooth fitting for the horror part... I have issues with the way Echo did it...
Also the personality/background of each of the four characters seems to loosely fit in with ones I've had, it really made me smile even more! And I course have desire to see what Vaniel looks like, or least know his species, clearly canine, but more specific unsure.
Hello! Thank you so much for checking my VN out, it makes me really happy that you enjoyed it despite the amateurish writing haha xd
And yes, I do hope I can make the horror part enjoyable and natural, im doing my best to improve my writing so hopefully it won't disappoint.
Vaniel is a white wolf anthro, I unfortunately didn't create a sprite for him just yet because im still an artist newbie (literally 0 artist experience just until I made this), but hopefully I can create one for him in the future.
If you did the sprites that already in game, then please do the rest!, they have more detail than seeming flat, even if lacking fine detail features, and the expressions! Perfect way to show them all! (The sprites pop a little bit)
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Xzavion is my favorite out of the others. But I hope to see the relationship development between the MC and Xzavion from best friends to lovers
Hehehe, we'll see 👀
Thanks for checking the vn out! <3
Nice. But we should be thanking you for creating this vn! 😀
Hello. I enjoyed it very much :D The characterization is very good and so the facial expressions when talking in mid-sentence. It's all very good so far.
And how do you pronounce Xzavion's name? is the X silent? or is EX-za-vion?
Thank you so much for checking the vn out! <3
Xzavion's name is pronounced the same way you do with xylophone, the "x" is pronounced like an "s".
Oh! and I really love the part when Zach mentioned Rouon Aro as his favorite UTAU singer OWO. I luv Rouon Aro too!!!
Aro-kunnn?! xd <3
First, I loved the reference to Konosuba ! In view of your notes, i was expected to see horror elements early but i was pleasantly surprised to don't see this yet(except for the introduction scene) and that's nice for me that you take your time to introduce the characters without going too fast in the horror elements.
(Also, i love rewatch the first conversation between Xzav and Varion idk why but i think just that the reactions of Xzav are really enjoying to see.) Btw, like said Offlinewolf, the characters change expression mid-dialogue adds value to this game and helps to make it unique according to me. That's really a good idea that you had here !
I'm looking forward for the next update ! But, obviously, take your time ! (sorry for my mistakes, that's my first feeback in a foreign language.)
Oh geeze, thanks so much for playing and enjoying the vn!
And yes, the horror elements will appear much later in the story, I do think it's best to introduce the characters more thoroughly first to give context on the whys and hows of the actions and decisions of said characters, it also gives me the chance to give clues that will help the player make the best decisions.
Also, it's a great honor to have you give your first feedback on my project, I really appreciate it and hopefully you'll stick around for the future updates of the vn!
Again, thank you so much xd
You're welcome !
I'm glad that we still have sometime before importants choices of life and death. I really like your writing about chill conversations. They are enjoyable to see (especially with Xzav and Zach eheh)
To be honest, i wanted give a feedback to one or two others games previously but i never dared to do this. I feared that my feedback would be useless or incomprehensible but you take the time to respond to all the comments so i think that was a good push for me to dare to make one ! (sorry again for the mistakes).
when is the next update?
Hello! Unfortunately, I won't and will never give specific dates on when updates for the vn will release. Because I am a one person team, its hard enough to do everything from writing, drawing, encoding, what more if I get pressured to rush all of those and release them in a specific date, not only will the update be unpolished, many parts of it may also get cut out for the sake of reaching the deadline. I am still on college too so I only got a few hours spare to work on it everyday.
Hopefully you would understand, and I hope this won't make you lose interest in the project, I will do my best to release updates as soon as they are polished and ready.
oh....its ok. just hyped for the next story line,its good.<3
Its all good, thank you for your understanding uwu
This is a great initial release i love it.
I love the characters specially Will. The story and writing it manage to capture my attention right from the start. The only thing that bothers me a bit is the character design i think it need an improvement. Overall its 9.5/10 for me. Good Job looking forward in the next update.
Thanks so much for checking the VN out xd
And yes, the spritework really needs a bit of work, Im not satisfied with them yet, after all I only have a small team working on the project consisting of me, myself, and I. I have never really gotten into art until I thought about making this vn (literal zero art experience) everything from the sprites, backgrounds, and music are all placeholders for the time being until I either improve and earn the skill to make those or until I get someone more skilled than me to create those.
The next updates will probably still have these sprites to use unfortunately since I dont see myself hiring a professional artist anytime soon, I hope you can bare with me in this.
Again, thank you so much for enjoying the vn! uwu
This Is amazing love it and I love all the characters their so cute I loved every of it.
Thank you so much for playing thr VN! <3
This was a really delightful experience to read! I especially love how the characters change expression mid-dialogue, it makes them feel so alive. The characters were written really well and I liked them a lot!
Xzavion is such a treasure, I love him so much!
Looking forward to what comes next!
Thank you! I did do my best to make the characters feel more alive and realistic, I'm really happy you noticed that, again, thanks for checking my VN out xd
I really enjoyed your vn, it had a good start and your writing is very good too! Can't wait to see more updates ^^
Thank you so much! <3
That was quite something for an initial release! Lots of insights!, but it makes me dread what is to come... I can only hope you will make it feel more natural and smooth fitting for the horror part... I have issues with the way Echo did it...
Also the personality/background of each of the four characters seems to loosely fit in with ones I've had, it really made me smile even more! And I course have desire to see what Vaniel looks like, or least know his species, clearly canine, but more specific unsure.
Hello! Thank you so much for checking my VN out, it makes me really happy that you enjoyed it despite the amateurish writing haha xd
And yes, I do hope I can make the horror part enjoyable and natural, im doing my best to improve my writing so hopefully it won't disappoint.
Vaniel is a white wolf anthro, I unfortunately didn't create a sprite for him just yet because im still an artist newbie (literally 0 artist experience just until I made this), but hopefully I can create one for him in the future.
Again, thanks so much for playing! uwu
If you did the sprites that already in game, then please do the rest!, they have more detail than seeming flat, even if lacking fine detail features, and the expressions! Perfect way to show them all! (The sprites pop a little bit)
they are so cute, the VN looks awesome I'm looking forward to more
Thank you so much for playing >w<
This was so cute, can't wait for the next update!
Thank you so much for checking it out xd
Will there be an Android version, it looks good but I can't play it
There will be one once I figure out how to port it to android, it mighy take a while tho
I'll just have to wait
You can emulate every ren'py game with https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=cyou.joiplay.renpy and some RPG Maker games with https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=cyou.joiplay.rpgm via JoiPlay on your Android phone. Therefore you need to install thes base app https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=cyou.joiplay.joiplay and then install the extensions from above, they will automatically work.
thanks so much