This was a really delightful experience to read! I especially love how the characters change expression mid-dialogue, it makes them feel so alive. The characters were written really well and I liked them a lot!
Thank you! I did do my best to make the characters feel more alive and realistic, I'm really happy you noticed that, again, thanks for checking my VN out xd
That was quite something for an initial release! Lots of insights!, but it makes me dread what is to come... I can only hope you will make it feel more natural and smooth fitting for the horror part... I have issues with the way Echo did it...
Also the personality/background of each of the four characters seems to loosely fit in with ones I've had, it really made me smile even more! And I course have desire to see what Vaniel looks like, or least know his species, clearly canine, but more specific unsure.
Hello! Thank you so much for checking my VN out, it makes me really happy that you enjoyed it despite the amateurish writing haha xd
And yes, I do hope I can make the horror part enjoyable and natural, im doing my best to improve my writing so hopefully it won't disappoint.
Vaniel is a white wolf anthro, I unfortunately didn't create a sprite for him just yet because im still an artist newbie (literally 0 artist experience just until I made this), but hopefully I can create one for him in the future.
If you did the sprites that already in game, then please do the rest!, they have more detail than seeming flat, even if lacking fine detail features, and the expressions! Perfect way to show them all! (The sprites pop a little bit)
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This was a really delightful experience to read! I especially love how the characters change expression mid-dialogue, it makes them feel so alive. The characters were written really well and I liked them a lot!
Xzavion is such a treasure, I love him so much!
Looking forward to what comes next!
Thank you! I did do my best to make the characters feel more alive and realistic, I'm really happy you noticed that, again, thanks for checking my VN out xd
I really enjoyed your vn, it had a good start and your writing is very good too! Can't wait to see more updates ^^
Thank you so much! <3
That was quite something for an initial release! Lots of insights!, but it makes me dread what is to come... I can only hope you will make it feel more natural and smooth fitting for the horror part... I have issues with the way Echo did it...
Also the personality/background of each of the four characters seems to loosely fit in with ones I've had, it really made me smile even more! And I course have desire to see what Vaniel looks like, or least know his species, clearly canine, but more specific unsure.
Hello! Thank you so much for checking my VN out, it makes me really happy that you enjoyed it despite the amateurish writing haha xd
And yes, I do hope I can make the horror part enjoyable and natural, im doing my best to improve my writing so hopefully it won't disappoint.
Vaniel is a white wolf anthro, I unfortunately didn't create a sprite for him just yet because im still an artist newbie (literally 0 artist experience just until I made this), but hopefully I can create one for him in the future.
Again, thanks so much for playing! uwu
If you did the sprites that already in game, then please do the rest!, they have more detail than seeming flat, even if lacking fine detail features, and the expressions! Perfect way to show them all! (The sprites pop a little bit)
they are so cute, the VN looks awesome I'm looking forward to more
Thank you so much for playing >w<
This was so cute, can't wait for the next update!
Thank you so much for checking it out xd
Will there be an Android version, it looks good but I can't play it
There will be one once I figure out how to port it to android, it mighy take a while tho
I'll just have to wait
You can emulate every ren'py game with https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=cyou.joiplay.renpy and some RPG Maker games with https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=cyou.joiplay.rpgm via JoiPlay on your Android phone. Therefore you need to install thes base app https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=cyou.joiplay.joiplay and then install the extensions from above, they will automatically work.
thanks so much