TOCN Version 1.0.3 - School Tour with Wilson


NOTE: You can start a new save file when you play the new build, this is because the old ones might not work anymore due to some changes in the code.

Heya, I'm not dead!... yet.

Here are the following changes and additions;

- Added Day 3 (roughly 13k words)
- Added multiple new expressions and edited some for various characters
- Added 1 CG (I got lazy this time, sorry)
- Added new free backgrounds and music
- Several corrections for the script and code for previous days

Sorry it took so long, I got lazy and had the time of my life procrastinating, yes, I have no other excuses. Though college stuff might have played a part in it due to some burnouts and deadlines along the way. I'm sad to say that day 4 might take as long or maybe even longer depending on what happens in the future

Anyway, I hope that the wait was worth it and you can thoroughly enjoy this update! I had a lot of fun writing this and I hope you do too. Please consider giving me feedback about the VN in the comments, it really helps a lot <3

Thank you so much for reading!

P.S. I'd like to thank Corusc8 once again for proofreading and helping me provide the android build, thanks a lot! xd

Files

ThatOneCelestialNight-1.0.3-pc.zip 134 MB
Dec 13, 2021
ThatOneCelestialNight-1.0.3-mac.zip 99 MB
Dec 13, 2021
tocn.vn-10003-universal-release.apk 116 MB
Dec 13, 2021

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Oh yes, I'm looking forward to this.

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Update, the update was great. Heh

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Thank you!

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Is that a misnomer on purpose??? "Comfort Room" I thought it was a bloody lounge! *noped backwards in time out of there*

BUT YOU ARE A DOG! XD and he keeps proving it >.>

REALLY need to know what Van looks like for this day 3! XD, could also make some one off CGs of him being "Leashed" XD

The foreshadowing... but also how natural it stands two be regardless! Wow!

On the subject of the horror part I mentioned a while ago, all there is to say is that if there are routes, the initial horror should be the same/similar (consistency), but how the characters react to it may differ (logical).  This keeps it from deviating horribly when the initial impact happens, and makes sure to follow smooth flow of the character's personality.  This is also VERY important if in all the cases what happens as intro to the VN will always transpire (what happens after is not known, important to keep that cliffhanger!), else you would end up with highly different endings that may up having some to a lot of inconsistences betwixt the routes.

When I said ECHO did the horror wrong, this is what I mean, every route has a totally different start and endpoint, its like they aren't from the same VN.  This mess up also doesn't happen until after route selection, the horror isn't present or established yet even.  This only further leads to the many mess ups.

You have already made the horror known, as backstory for now.  Its established and they (two of them) are aware of it having existed, it isn't some random surprise out of the blue.

Now... I'm assuming Husky then Fox now for next wo days.

omg you are here :D ty